PAKK20622 NURFARZANA HUDA BINTI MUHAMMAD HARIS GEEC1052 COURSEWORK WRITING A NARRATIVE ESSAY - “A REAL FRIEND IS ONE WHO WALKS IN WHEN THE REST OF THE WORLD WALKS OUT”

 

Hai everyone, I am Huda. I am IPG student. Today  I will submit my coursework about writing a narrative essay.

 

“ A Real Friend Is One Who Walks In When The Rest Of The World Walks Out”

 

Pre-writing  

                        What – meaning of  best friend

                          Who- my best friend

                       When- happy and sad

                        Where- at secondary school

                       How- treat me like a queen, advice me, protect me, always be my

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Reach out  when I need

-       Protect me

-       Story about my experience of bullying case

Always available as a place to express

-       Expressing sadness failing add math

-       Angered parent

Always have the same goals

-       Study group

-      Teach 

Drafting

     Almost everyone has fantasied about having a fantastic friend in their life. What exactly does it mean to have  good friend? A good friend, or best friend, is someone who is always there for us, whether we are happy or unhappy. Our flaws and weaknesses are also continually cover by good pals. They also reprimanded me for my inaccuracy and did not hesitate to correct it. They also support me in whatever decision I make. As a result, I'd like to share my fantastic friendship with my best buddy with everyone.

   The story began when I moved to a new school. SMK tun Ismail is the name of the school. This is where my best mate and I met. I was initially hesitant to speak with them. Those who open the conversation. They are quite nice to me. When I'm with them, this makes me feel comfortable. They asked me why I moved to this school, and then I told them about my experience being bullied in school. They were shocked. Since then, they have always been with me to protect me, and they are always there for me when I need them.

      Moreover, they too have become loyal listeners with my problems. At the final exam of the fourth form year, I am found to have resulted in a failed in the subject of additional mathematic. At that time, I was deeply disappointed and saddened. When I came home, my mom scold me for my result. This is adding to my anxiety. I tell my dear friend about all of my issues. They gave me advice and support. They suggested that I take extra classes for this subject. Yet I refused due to lack of money and did not want to bother my parens.

      At that time, they had coming up with the idea to help me. The next day, after school hours, they would teach me what they had learned from the extra class. Since then, we have always come home late to studytogether. This situation dragged on until we all managed to pass on this subject. At this moment, I am very touched and grateful to have friends like them. In conclusion, we need to be good at determining the circle with whose we are friends, because a good friend will lead us in a better direction.

 

 

 

 

 

Revision

  Almost everyone has fantasised (fantasied) about having a fantastic friend in their life. What exactly does it mean to have good (to have a good) friend? A good friend, or best friend, is someone who is always there for us, whether we are happy or unhappy. Our flaws and weaknesses are also continually cover by our good pals. They also reprimanded me for my inaccuracy and did not hesitate to correct it. They also support me in whatever decision I make. As a result, I'd like to share my fantastic friendship with my best buddy with everyone.

  The storey  (story) began when I moved to a new school. SMK Tun Ismail is the name of the school. This is where my best friend and I met. I was initially hesitant to speak with them. Those who open the conversation. They are quite nice to me. When I'm with them, this makes me feel comfortable. They asked me why I moved to this school, and then I told them about my experience being bullied in (at) school. They were shocked. Since then, they have always been with me to protect me, and they are always there for me when I need them.

  Moreover, they too have become loyal listeners with(to) my problems. At the final exam of the fourth form year, I was found to have failed in the subject of additional mathematics. At that time, I am deeply disappointed and saddened. When I came home, my mom scold me for my results. This is adding to my anxiety. Should I tell my dear friend about all of my issues? They gave me advice and support. They suggested that I take extra classes for this subject. Yet I refused due to lack of money and did not want to bother my parens (parents)

  At that time, they had coming up with the (an) idea to help me. The next day, after school hours, they would teach me what they had learned from the extra class. Since then, we have always come home late to studytogether (study together). This situation dragged on until we all managed to pass on this subject. At this moment, I am very touched and grateful to have friends like them. In conclusion, we need to be good at determining the circle with whose we are friends, because a good friend will lead us in a better direction.

 

 

     

 

 

 Editing

 Almost everyone has fantasied about having a fantastic friend in their life. What exactly does it mean to have a good friend? A good friend, or best friend, is someone who is always there for us, whether we are happy or unhappy. Our flaws and weaknesses are also continually cover (covered) by our good pals. They also reprimanded me for my inaccuracy and did not hesitate to correct it. They also support me in whatever decision I make. As a result, I'd like to share my fantastic friendship with my best buddy with everyone.

  The story  began(begins) when I moved to a new school. SMK Tun Ismail is the name of the school. This is where my best friend and I met. I was initially hesitant to speak with them. Those who open the conversation. They are (were)quite nice to me. When I'm with them, this makes me feel comfortable. They asked me why I moved to this school, and then I told them about my experience being bullied at school. They were shocked. Since then, they have always been with me to protect me, and they are always there for me when I need them.

  Moreover, they too have become loyal listeners to my problems. At the final exam of the fourth form year, I was found to have failed in the subject of additional mathematics. At that time, I am (was)deeply disappointed and saddened. When I came home, my mom scold (scolded) me for my results. This is adding to my anxiety. Should I tell my dear friend about all of my issues? They gave me advice and support. They suggested that I take extra classes for this subject. Yet I refused due to lack of money and did not want to bother my parents.

  At that time, they had coming (come) up with an idea to help me. The next day, after school hours, they would teach me what they had learned from the extra class. Since then, we have always come home late to study together. This situation dragged on until we all managed to pass on this subject. At this moment, I am very touched and grateful to have friends like them. In conclusion, we need to be good at determining the circle with whose (whom) we are friends, because a good friend will lead us in a better direction.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Publishing

  Almost everyone has fantasied about having a fantastic friend in their life. What exactly does it mean to have a good friend? A good friend, or best friend, is someone who is always there for us, whether we are happy or unhappy. Our flaws and weaknesses are also continually covered by our good pals. They also reprimanded me for my inaccuracy and did not hesitate to correct it. They also support me in whatever decision I make. As a result, I'd like to share my fantastic friendship with my best buddy with everyone.

  The story begins when I moved to a new school. SMK Tun Ismail is the name of the school. This is where my best friend and I met. I was initially hesitant to speak with them. Those who open the conversation. They were quite nice to me. When I'm with them, this makes me feel comfortable. They asked me why I moved to this school, and then I told them about my experience being bullied at school. They were shocked. Since then, they have always been with me to protect me, and they are always there for me when I need them.

  Moreover, they too have become loyal listeners to my problems. At the final exam of the fourth form year, I was found to have failed in the subject of additional mathematics. At that time, I was deeply disappointed and saddened. When I came home, my mom scolded me for my results. This is adding to my anxiety. Should I tell my dear friend about all of my issues? They gave me advice and support. They suggested that I take extra classes for this subject. Yet I refused due to lack of money and did not want to bother my parents.

  At that time, they had come up with an idea to help me. The next day, after school hours, they would teach me what they had learned from the extra class. Since then, we have always come home late to study together. This situation dragged on until we all managed to pass on this subject. At this moment, I am very touched and grateful to have friends like them. In conclusion, we need to be good at determining the circle with whom we are friends, because a good friend will lead us in a better direction.